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Gamzee and I talked about his past a bit more, his yellow eyes dropping pearls of salty water since it was so hard to have been a yaoi for so long. My arms were wrapped against him as his hot tears lended on my bossom, his head resting there. I was stroking his long and slightly messy charcoal hair, their darkness reminding me of ravens, crows and the darkness of his own past. His curls wrapped around my fingers, and I knew my heart was as entangled as my digits; I was in love with him so much I'd die if he left me. And I could feel he felt the same seeing how his heart fluttered, going doki doki fast.
We laid down in bed cuddling because it was late, him waiting for me to go in my bathroom to take a shower and put my nice nightgown that I hoped he didn't mind was a bit transparent because I'm not a slut or a whore and I didn't want him to think so because of my night wears, but he was already asleep with his arms open waiting for me so it was fine. I slid in them, my body molding into his perfectly, proving furthermore we were perfect together, his hard yet soft chest serving as my pillow.
The next morning we woke up together still wrapped in a tight and loving embrace, his face an inch away from mine. He leaned in closer and kissed me good morning after whispering a small "GoOd MoRnInG sUnShInE!", his tongue tasting like faygo, marshmallows and love. I reciprocated the kiss with my own minty strawberry breath, our tongues wrestling, me letting him win eventually, some saliva dripping along his chin from our intense mouth love making.
We went to have breakfast, drinking faygo and eating lemon pie since it was the best I could offer, me feeding him.
"Say aaaaah Gamzee-kun!"
"AaAaAaHh!"
With that I slid the spoon in his moist cavern, his sharp teeth sinking into it and making sexy noises as he chewed, his yellow orbs staring in my blue and green ones with a hint of lust behind them. I ate my own food in a very lady like fashion, with my elbows stuck to my side and my legs crossed humbly,  using the fork and knife on the most outside part of the table first then the one closest to my dish, enjoying my breakfast with my love.
When we were done, we decided to go on a date to the park, holding hands and staring in each other's windows to the soul. We kept on walking along, sitting on a bench to share some lunch and enjoying each other's company like the newly wed we almost were. He got down on his knee when we got in a small boat on the pond, looking up at me and taking out a wonderful gold ring with a capricorn shaped diamound.
"WiIl YoU bE mY wIfE, tSuKi? I lOvE yOu."
I blushed pinker than ever, all my blood rushing to my face as my heart pumped my blood fasted than ever before. I could feel butterflies flutter in my stomach, same butterfly dancing around us as well as fireflies, the sunsetting and the place looking magical. Some wind made sakura blossoms fly by us, wrapping up in a wonderful scent and pink aura since the water was reflecting the clouds and sun that was setting.
I trembled a little because it was a lot of emotion before nodding, throwing my arms around him and making the boat moves dangerously but since he's so strong he got it to stop and we didn't fall in the water where my lolita dress and hairdo would have been ruined, and his make up too.
"Hai! let's get married, Gamzee-kun!"
He smiled happily at that before our lips met in a fierce kiss, our entire soul and feelings passing to each others in perfect understanding since we didn't need words to get what the other thought. We were very very happy since he loved me and Tavros was dead and he was protecting me from being bullied and I accepted him even if he was a yaoi who'd been raped by a wheelchair.
Homestuck belongs to Hussie sama! Arigato Hussie sama, you're sugoi >u<

I said there would be lemon aha, got you!
I'll post the real one with a warning in next chapter!
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XxYowlingWolfStormxX Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Raped by a wheelchair holy peanuts
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LokiTheCat1 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Ah~ This is such a cute fic! I've been following it since the beginning and I decided to re read it :D I love how you write gamzee and how you know that Tavros is an evil Rapist ):< I love your bio and I ship you and gamzee so hard! I like how you clearly know how to use JapaneseAnd you're such a good writer too! 5/5 would read again and again
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102AnimeLover102 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*tries to imagine Gamzee getting raped by a wheelchair* ...... holy shit.........
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NeroLuna Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Tavros made out with Gamzee passionately and then they pailed. The End.
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I think we all can agree my story was better than this one. 0u0
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randMCER Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
" I accepted him even if he was a yaoi who'd been raped by a wheelchair."
I don't even
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AkatsukiAshly Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What the fuck did I just read?
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PrincesTomboy Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The best thing is that you just Japanese much more accurately than My Immortal and such. That way I can enjoy this 'kawaii' little trollfic without the Japanese-loving part of my brain getting annoyed! Woo!
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student General Artist
are you sating my japanese in this is good or did I misunderstand...?
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PrincesTomboy Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your Japanese is very good, ecspeccially compared to silly people who confuse "nice to meet you" and "how are you" which just sounds bad.
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student General Artist
My Japanese is shit, I couldn't even ask where the toilets are if I ever went to go to Japan so...
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AkiraKazumi Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm going to word this as delicately as possible.
Your writing style isn't terrible, but it would be even better if you replaced the Japanese terms with more suitable English terms. Also, explain exactly what you are wearing, by simply putting " My Lolita dress and Hairdo " it seems a little vague and definitely will annoy those who read it.
What your readers really enjoy is descriptive writing and if it is helpful, you could even use a thesaurus to look up different words instead of sexy or various uses of "love".
Lastly, I cannot even begin to express how much you hurt a good fanfiction by bashing a character. Perhaps you could try to ease up on Tavros a bit? In the entire web comic, Tavros never hurt anyone, and he was always the one who was being hurt. You'll upset many people by flaming a character who never hurt anyone.
I hope these tips were helpful and maybe helped improve your style even further!
-Akira
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
You don't know the real Tavros, that's why you say that. I will take up your advice though!
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TheHetaNerd Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Why do you use fucking Japanese you don't know any Japanese stop using you god damn fucking weeaboo kill yourself.
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Proud weeaboo!
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Aneiryndae Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ahahahah oh my god I'm fucking done
is this for real
did you really write this
I'm dying
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm glad you liked it so much!
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ALLCAPSRAGING Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
TI, I'm sorry.....but it's a lost cause.


Just.....don't loose yourself, please.
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TrikzeeInimeg Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I try.

Oh well. I hope you read this, GW. Cause you need to snap out of it.

It might be nice to dream about it, but we need to stick to reality, no matter how much it hurts.
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ALLCAPSRAGING Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
My mom saw this, and she wants to say something to you


Child, you are only 14 years old, and you're speaking of sex toys?! First of all, there are children on here that are younger than 14 and at 14 you shouldn't even be mentioning sex toys much less even know about them, and how in the world do you get raped by a wheelchair, it's an inanimate object. What kind of drugs are you on? I think you need some psychological help. Seriously, SERIOUSLY, and since this site can block this kind of nature, and you're not even old enough to be discussing this, you need to be 18 years or older.

you heard her, take it from one who has experience. And don't you dare tell her wrong, good luck denying a 56 year old when you're only 14.
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Your mother is not my mother, therefore I will disregard what she said :3 Beside if she didn't want people my age to know about it she should do something so none of us could watch the news. The news are very bloody and talk about sex a lot, they shouldn't be available to people under 18.
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ALLCAPSRAGING Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
We DON'T watch the news, only the weather, because the news is bad.

My mom says


Does YOUR mother know what you're putting out here?
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student General Artist
She does :3 Your mom should concentrate on you instead of trying to take care of other kids on the internet. It's nice of her but as a mom myself I'm not telling her how to do her job either :3
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ALLCAPSRAGING Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
woah


woah

Back this fucking car UP

You mean to tell me, you're 14, and YOU HAVE A CHILD

You know what. I'm done.I am done trying to help you be SANE. I guess if we ever meet in person, you can get a brick to the face after i finish BASHING MY SKULL INTO A BRICK WALL COVERED IN LAND MINES YOU TWISTED FUCK.
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I do :3

And it's fine if you stop bothering me really!
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ALLCAPSRAGING Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
Listen, kid, you're 14 years old, barely a teenager, you shouldn't have a kid, your body is still too fragile to cope with it. Now, if you were older, you'd have an easier time, BUT I'M NOT TELLING YOU TO GET PREGNANT AT 16.



Anywho

I need to know this, you do live anywhere near Atlanta, Georgia?
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I won't give you my adress, and I do have a kid, and it actually went well.
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VengefulNarwhal Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"....since it was so hard to have been a yaoi for so long."
You know what a yaoi is, right?
"....his tongue tasting like faygo, marshmallows and love."
Try writing with persistent tense. Stick with past or present and don't alternate between the two.
so what does love taste like again seriously dafuq
"...making sexy noises as he chewed"
Your writing reminds me of the fanfic "My Immortal," in which everything the characters do is described as 'sexy'. Please don't.
And a final word- why, why, why do you use so much fangirl Japanese? It's horrible. It's annoying. I can pull better words out of my ass.
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Student General Artist
You don't understand my revolutionary writing style, it's genius, mom said so.
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Fractostratus Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I think you'll be a great writer once you have a bit more experience.
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Arigato >u<
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emotiyiff Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
congrats, this fucking story almost made me choke on my food from laughing so hard
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Because Tavros dies!
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EvilMudkip Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ive never laughed harder in my entire life
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Gamzeeswaifu Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Tavros' death does that!
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SonicTH-nerd Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
Wow that's rude to people in wheelchairs.
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